Last week in writing, we began writing responses to videos and books. We had to respond to the meaning of the text and how we can make connections. The students used emotive language and meaningful examples to respond to the message.

Here are some examples of students’ responses to the text ‘What Do You Do with an Idea?’:

This book was inspiring to me. It encouraged me to share some of my own ideas. when listening to the book, I felt joyful and delighted. I agree with the boy sharing his idea to the world because it changed his life forever.

I can identify with this story because one time I wanted to share my idea, but I didn’t think everyone was on the same page as me.

I think the story was stupendous. The text and illustrations were very detailed.

-Jake

I felt stupendous because the boy shared his ideas with everyone. I agree with the boy showing his ideas with everyone because his ideas changed into something big. I can identify with this situation because once I thought my idea was silly and didn’t say it, but it may have become an amazing idea.

I loved the characters because they encouraged people to share their ideas. I also liked when the boy stood upside down, and started walking. It was the funniest bit in the story.

-Patrick

I felt delighted and proud because the boy never gave up on his idea. Even if people think it is nonsense or silly. I disagree how he tried giving up his idea. I connect with the book because sometimes I think of an idea and put down my hand. But it is better to let it out.

I thought this book was marvellous. It had a big meaning, don’t give up on your idea. Even if your idea is wrong, just ask! You learn from your mistakes. The more mistakes you make, the more you learn.

-Selena

To feel motivated to share my ideas more, even if I think they are silly. That is because at the end of the book, it says, “your ideas could change the world.” I agree with not letting negative comments about your idea get to you. They are just opinions. I disagree with the book when the boy doubted his idea, because he thought it was silly. Always try new things. I identify with this book because sometimes, I too think my ideas are silly.

I think this book has a very good message. I really enjoyed the bit when the idea flew free and emerged as other ideas, inspiring other people.

-Amara